Friday, March 9, 2012

The Shop, by J. Carson Black

To cut to the chase, just say no.

This novel teetered on the edge of interesting.  Unfortunately, confused plot lines.  A lead character has a fear of water; it is presented in a way that makes me wonder if there was a prequel.  But, I don't care enough to even check for this.   Some characters are interesting and well developed.  The hero (fear of water woman) doesn't seem all that competent.   Overall, in need of serious editing.

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